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What is your opinion on being unemployed?

박혜진/2025-01-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Unemployment can be a loss of routine and a challenging of experience, but it's also a valuable time for personal growth and the development of new skills. So I think it's an essential time in life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Jinny!~

When I read the line that suggests unemployment may be an opportunity for personal development, I smiled. :D Hearing different people's perspectives on a certain issue can truly make a difference, so it's good to hear that from you and be reminded that it's not always about failing or losing time.

Chammy

Unemployment can be a loss of routine and a challenging of experience, but it's also a valuable time for personal growth and the development of new skills.

>> Unemployment can be a loss of routine and a challenging experience, but it's also a valuable time for personal growth and developing new skills.

So I think it's an essential time in life.

>> Correct

>>So I believe it is an important stage in one's life.