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What’s the best meeting/ gathering you’ve ever had, and why was it memorable?

임주미/2025-01-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My the best meeting is only one. The gathering of the member is 6,men is 4 and women is 2 includ of me. The all men is younger than me and women is older. we have been to Japan three times and met reguarly also I invite them my house at the end of every year. They are really funny and kind so I love them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Ji Mi! It seems like you always have a great time with these people. I'm sure you've made many wonderful memories together. ^^ See you in class tomorrow. Have a good day!
~T. Jewel 
My the best meeting is only one.
>>I have only one best meeting.
The gathering of the member is 6,men is 4 and women is 2 includ of me.
>>The gathering has 6 members: 4 men and 2 women, including myself.
The all men is younger than me and women is older.
>>All the men are younger than me, and the women are older than I am.
we have been to Japan three times and met reguarly 
>>We have been to Japan three times and meet regularly. 
also I invite them my house at the end of every year.
>>I also invite them to my house at the end of every year.
They are really funny and kind so I love them.
>>They are really funny and kind, which is why I love them.
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