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권경희/2025-03-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In any case, 'over' or 'excess' is not good. Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork,and over action and so on mean extreme. We could be choose 'All-you-can-drink(eat)' as one of the strategy of effective marketing tools . But ultimately these choices can have negative effects to people's health and global environment.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Ms. Lily!
You nailed it! We believe that anything "too much" is bad, and anything bad has an effect on us: personally, socially, and even in our environment. People should really act as the highest form of being, however, a lot of people also behave like animals who don't have proper judgment.
Happy weekend!
Aki~


In any case, 'over' or 'excess' is not good.
>>> CORRECT!

Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork, and over action, and so on mean extreme.
>>> Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork, over action, and so on mean extreme.

We could be choose 'All-you-can-drink(eat)' as one of the strategy of effective marketing tools .
>>> We could choose 'All-you-can-drink(eat)' as one of the strategies of effective marketing tools.

But ultimately these choices can have negative effects to people's health and global environment.
>>> But ultimately these choices can have negative effects on people's health and the global environment.
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