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Do you like going to crowded places? Why or why not?

이진태/2025-01-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't like going to crowded places. I feel like this, my energy is disappered when I'm in a crowded places. And If I go to crowded place, heavy treffic jam is mandatory.
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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I don't like going to crowded places.
>> CORRECT 
OR >> I prefer to avoid crowded places.

I feel like this, my energy is disappered when I'm in a crowded places.
>> I feel like my energy disappears when I’m in a crowded area. 

And If I go to crowded place, heavy treffic jam is mandatory.
>> Also, if I go to a crowded place, heavy traffic jams are inevitable.
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