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Do you think being a professional dancer would be a good job?

차유진/2025-01-12

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I think so because the professional dancers teach dancer and dancer makes many people feel happy so it is good job.
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                   Do you think being a professional dancer would be a good job?


I think so because the professional dancers teach dancer and dancer makes many people feel happy so it is good job.
>> I believe so because professional dancers teach amateur or other dancers and make many people happy so it's a good job. 
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