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Who or what influenced you to love reading?

송명자/2025-01-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My neighbor older sister, who I respected and followed, influenced me. She was always reading books. She became my role model. She is the first mentor of my life to this day.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Song! I love how you shared that your older neighbor influenced your love for reading. It’s truly inspiring how someone you respected so much could guide you toward such a valuable habit. Your story reminds us how mentors and role models can shape our lives in beautiful ways. Keep fostering your love for books. It’s something that will enrich your life endlessly!

~ T. Lia

My neighbor older sister, who I respected and followed, influenced me.
>> My older neighbor, who I respected and followed, influenced me.

She was always reading books. She became my role model.
>> CORRECT

She is the first mentor of my life to this day.
>> She is the first mentor of my life and remains so to this day.



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