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What is fashion for me?

유수빈/2025-01-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Fashion gives me satisfaction and confidence. For example, I love my green Cardigan, so when I wear this cloth, my feeling is so happy. And every time I look in the mirror, it makes me smile. Therefore, I have a positive feeling when I think my fashion.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kara!^^

I think gree really suits your skin color.

I think fashion is whatever a person would wear that makes her comfortable.

Andrea

Fashion gives me satisfaction and confidence.

>> Correct

For example, I love my green Cardigan, so when I wear this cloth, my feeling is so happy.

>> For example, I love my green Cardigan, so when I wear it, I feel happy.

And every time I look in the mirror, it makes me smile.

>> Every time I look at the mirror, it makes me smile.

Therefore, I have a positive feeling when I think my fashion.

>> Therefore, I have a positive feeling when I think of my fashion.