Talk about a country where you want to experience living in for a year or two.
박순호/2025-04-09
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Actually, I plan to travel around the world after I retire. I have less than 3 years left until I retire.
The Korean YouTuber I introduced in class is currently staying in Baguio to study English after traveling to several countries for the past three years.
He said he felt his English skills were not enough to communicate freely and make friends with tourists from all over the world.
I want to do the opposite of what he did.
What I want to say is that I will first live in Baguio, Philippines for a year to learn English and then travel around the world.
I know that Baguio's weather is good to live in because it is neither cold nor hot all year round.
In addition, the cost of living is cheaper than in Korea, which is also an advantage.
I think the Philippines is made up of many islands and has a variety of cultures, and there will be many buildings made during the Spanish and American colonies.
So I think the Philippines is a good place to experience living in for about a year.
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