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You’re planning to travel soon, aren’t you?

임주미/2025-01-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes.I am. I have a plan travel. I am going to go to South America. I 'm gonna leave on February 26, It would take for 32days. Peru,Bolivia, chile, Aregentina and Brazil. I am waiting with pleasure.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ju Mi! Wow! This sounds so exciting! ^^ I’m sure you’ll have an amazing trip soon! Thank you for doing your homework. See you tomorrow.
~T. Jewel
Yes, I am. 
>>CORRECT
I have a plan travel.
>>I have a plan to travel.
I am going to go to South America.
>>CORRECT
I 'm gonna leave on February 26.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>I’m going to leave on February 26.
It would take for 32days.
>>It would take 32 days.
Peru,Bolivia, chile, Aregentina and Brazil.
>>I will go to Peru, Bolivia, Chile, Argentina, and Brazil.
I am waiting with pleasure.
>>CORRECT
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