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If you could call any famous person worldwide, who would you want it to be?

이진태/2025-01-09

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If I could call anyone, I would call Warren Buffett. He is most famous investor in history. So, I want to learn his skill.

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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

If I could call anyone, I would call Warren Buffett.
>> CORRECT
OR >> If I had the chance to call anyone, I would choose Warren Buffett.

He is most famous investor in history. So, I want to learn his skill.
>> He is the most famous investor in history, and I want to learn his skills.