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이영숙/2025-01-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I too much depend on my family. I feel like stupid for my life because I want to learning English. I don’t want to depend on my family.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Michelle!

I hope that learning English can make you more independent, especially since you are living in America. Also, I don’t think you are stupid. You are doing well and putting in a lot of effort, so I really admire you for that!

- T. Caitlyn

I too much depend on my family.

>> I depend too much on my family.
I feel like stupid for my life because I want to learning English.

>> I feel stupid about my life, so I want to learn English.
I don’t want to depend on my family.

>> CORRECT