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오혜영/2025-01-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hello jewel☺️ I did homework, yesterday. So I attatched the picture. Please check this. Have a nice day.☺️

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! I feel you as I read your homework. Always remember that we, as working moms, should be proud of balancing work and family. Always take care. Have a great day!

~T. Jewel

I wonder if there is obviously such a thing.

>>CORRECT

>>I wonder if there truly is such a thing.

But It seems like these depend on thought.

>>But it seems like these things depend on one's thoughts.
When I stayed at home as house-wife, sometime I experienced distressed situation.

>>When I stayed at home as a housewife, sometimes I experienced distressing situations.

It was not situation coming from outside, but in mind to do someting for me and my son.

>>It was not a situation coming from outside, but it's something in my mind to do for me and my son.

I think that It is same now comparing with the period.

>>I think that it is the same now compared to that period.

However, I always thanks for now that I can busy to do something like housework or company work.

>>However, I am always thankful now that I can stay busy doing things like housework or company work.

It means a kind of evidence that I can thing I'm still healthy and I could be involved in this society.

>>It's evidence that I'm still healthy and can be involved in this society.