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I like looking at the moon.

유수빈/2025-01-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like looking at the moon. When I look at the moon, I feel that my stress is reduced. Because the moon is always shinning, so when I watch the shining moon without any thinking, I feel relaxed and calm. Therefore, I love looking at the moon.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kara!

Thanks for sending your homework.

The moon is indeed magical. I like staring at it too.

I feel relaxed and fascinated everytime I see a full moon.

Andrea

I like looking at the moon.

>> Correct

When I look at the moon, I feel that my stress is reduced.

>> Correct

Because the moon is always shinning, so when I watch the shining moon without any thinking, I feel relaxed and calm.

>> The moon is always shining so when I watch it without thinking of anything, I feel calm and relaxed.

Therefore, I love looking at the moon.

>> Correct