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이영숙/2025-01-08

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I like San Francisco The ocean is so beautiful drive by car . The city of also beautiful.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Michelle!

I can imagine how beautiful it is to drive around while sightseeing in San Francisco. I hope to visit there in the future!

- T. Caitlyn

I like San Francisco

>> CORRECT
The ocean is so beautiful drive by car .

>> The ocean is so beautiful to see while driving by car.

The city of also beautiful.

>> The city is also beautiful.