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Happiness isn't choice.

유수빈/2025-01-03

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I think that happiness isn't choice. Happiness presences wherever and whenever. But most people notice happiness when their feeling is only good. We need to notice that having negative feelings is also hapipiness. Because having any feelings by itself helps our inner growth and realize how to control our feelings naturally. Therefore, happiness isn't choice. Teacher, I tried to participate in the class, but the Skype program has expired and will not run. What should I do? I'm flustered...

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kara!

Try to uninstall and install Skype once again.

If it still doesn't work, make a new Skype account and give me your new Skype I.D.

Andrea

I think that happiness isn't choice.

>> I think that happiness isn't a choice.

Happiness presences wherever and whenever. But most people notice happiness when their feeling is only good.

>. Happiness is present everywhere and anytime but most people notice happiness when they feel good.

We need to notice that having negative feelings is also hapipiness. Because having any feelings by itself helps our inner growth and realize how to control our feelings naturally.

>> We need to notice that having negative feelings is also happiness because having feelings by itself helps our inner growth and realize how to control our feelings naturally.

Therefore, happiness isn't choice

>> Therefore, happiness isn't a choice. .