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Do you think it's a good idea to write your goals down and tick them off as you achieve them?

최서연/2025-01-03

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I think it's a good method because visualizing an accurate goal becomes clear. And I think the advantage of that method is that I can derive clear goals from complex thoughts through the process of writing. Even if I haven't achieved it, if I've reached a similar goal, I can be satisfied with it. So I used to write it down when I'm worried or stressed.

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Happy New Year, Seo Yeon!

Let us maintain our vision and work toward becoming better versions of ourselves. ^_^

Chammy.

I think it's a good method because visualizing an accurate goal becomes clear.

>>Correct
And I think the advantage of that method is that I can derive clear goals from complex thoughts through the process of writing.

>>I believe the advantage of this method is that I can clarify complex thoughts into clear goals through the process of writing.

Even if I haven't achieved it, if I've reached a similar goal, I can be satisfied with it. So I used to write it down when I'm worried or stressed.

>> Even if I haven't achieved my goal, reaching a similar one can still bring satisfaction. When I'm worried or stressed, I write my thoughts down.