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Whawhat do you enjoy most about learning English?

임주미/2025-01-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I really like to speak English. It is the reason why I study English. I always have been wanting for a long time. and I want to speak English well than now. When I became a granmather , I'd like to study English , I won't give up.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ju Mi! Don't give up! I always believe in you. ^^ I admire your dedication to learning English. Thank you for always doing your homework.

~T. Jewel

I really like to speak English.

>>CORRECT

OR
>>I really enjoy speaking English.
It is the reason why I study English.

>>CORRECT

>>That is the reason why I study English.
I always have been wanting for a long time.

>>I have always wanted it for a long time.
and I want to speak English well than now.

>>I want to speak English better than I do now.
When I became a granmather , I'd like to study English ,

>>When I become a grandmother, I’d like to study English.

I won't give up.

>>CORRECT