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Why did the plane crash in Jeju?

차유진/2025-01-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
First of all, it's not Jeju but Muan airport many expert say landing gear is broke down but some people think it's because of bird strike. 😢
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Jean~~



                                     

                             
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First of all, it's not Jeju but Muan airport many expert say landing gear is broke down but some people think it's because of bird strike.
>> First of all, it's not Jeju but Muan Airport. Many experts say the landing gear broke down or malfunctioned but some people think it's because of a bird strike.
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