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류영주/2024-12-30

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Q: What springs to mind when you hear the word ‘complain’? Why might people complain about you? A: When I hear the word 'complain', anger comes to my mind. Actually, people don't need to always be angry when they complain about something because complaining is just saying something that one don't like, but people usually complain with anger. And I think people would complain about me because I made a mistake or did something wrong.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Paul!
Good job! Your response is thoughtful and addresses both parts of the question well. Keep working on making your sentences more concise and precise!
~ Teacher Trixia

CONTENT:
When I hear the word 'complain', anger comes to my mind.
- When I hear the word "complain," anger comes to mind
Actually, people don't need to always be angry when they complain about something because complaining is just saying something that one don't like, but people usually complain with anger.
- Actually, people don’t always need to be angry when they complain because complaining is just expressing something they don’t like, but people often complain with anger.
And I think people would complain about me because I made a mistake or did something wrong.
-  I think people might complain about me if I make a mistake or do something wrong.

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