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The movie which influenced me the most

양기연/2024-12-30

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The movie 'Dead Poets Society ' is one of my favorite movies. The movie has a significant lesson about a good teacher and what kind of education is needed. At that time I was obsessed with good school results for my students, so I was impatient to my students. Sometimes I punished the students who didn't do their homework or study hard. After watching the movie, I reflected on my behavior as a teacher.

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Hi, Gi Yean!

I haven't watched this movie yet, but I will take note of it and watch it in the future. I totally understand how you feel because, for academies, seeing the results through grades is very important. It makes me happy that this movie made you reflect as a teacher, and I think it's more fulfilling for you to teach now than before.

- T. Caitlyn

The movie 'Dead Poets Society ' is one of my favorite movies.

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The movie has a significant lesson about a good teacher and what kind of education is needed.

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At that time I was obsessed with good school results for my students, so I was impatient to my students.

>> At that time, I was obsessed with good school results for my students, so I was impatient with my students.

Sometimes I punished the students who didn't do their homework or study hard.

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After watching the movie, I reflected on my behavior as a teacher.
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