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If you had to live off convenience store food for a day, what would your meals look like?

임주미/2024-12-26

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Recently,I went to the convence store in Seoul. There are several kinds of fruit. If I should to eat for a day, I will have Banna,grape,steamed bun and unsweetened soy milk. It is easy to eat steamed bun in the wintet at the convenience store and It is so delicious.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ju Mi! Your food choices were fresh and delicious. I love steamed buns, too! Thank you for doing your homework!See you tomorrow!

~T. Jewel

Recently, I went to the convence store in Seoul.

>>Recently, I went to the convenience store in Seoul.
There are several kinds of fruit.

>>CORRECT

>>There are several types of fruit.
If I should to eat for a day, I will have Banna,grape,steamed bun and unsweetened soy milk.

>>If I had to eat for a day, I would have a banana, grapes, steamed buns, and unsweetened soy milk.
It is easy to eat steamed bun in the wintet at the convenience store and It is so delicious.

>>It is easy to eat steamed buns in the winter at the convenience store, and they are so delicious.