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회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If I exercise 4 times a week. My body will be good and I will be careful eat.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Michelle!

I agree! Exercising regularly can make our body fit and healthy.

- T. Caitlyn

If I exercise 4 times a week. My body will be good and I will be careful eat.

>> If I exercise 4 times a week, my body will be fit and I will be careful about what I eat.