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Do you think we can ot do something about natural disasters?

이복희/2025-05-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think that we have a lot of ways that we can do it. I can prepare disaster prevention before. For example l can fix my house, I can prepare something that I need it when I suffer disaster. Always I can look daugerous place, and do without it. But I think that most importent is we have to care our's earth. Earth is not eternally for us. Nowadays earth is getting sick. We damaged a lot of earth's everything. So we have to keep and care earth for us and our's future people.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good morning, Ms. Eva!
I agree with you, we may not be able to save the Earth 100%, but we can "slow down" the destruction. People should unite in taking care of the earth for the next generation.
Have a great day!
See you later.
Aki~

I think that we have a lot of ways that we can do it.
>> CORRECT!

I can prepare disaster prevention before.
>>> I can prepare for disaster prevention before.

For example l can fix my house, I can prepare something that I need it when I suffer disaster.
>>> For example, l can fix my house, I can prepare something that I need when I suffer a disaster.

Always I can look daugerous place, and do without it.
>>> I can always check on dangerous prone places, and do without it.

But I think that most importent is we have to care our's earth
>>> But I think that the most important thing is we have to care the earth

Earth is not eternally for us.
>> CORRECT!

Nowadays earth is getting sick.
>>> Nowadays, the Earth is getting sick.

We damaged a lot of earth's everything.
>>> We have damaged a lot of the Earth's natural resources.

So we have to keep and care earth for us and our's future people.
>>> So we have to keep and care for the Earth for us and our future people.


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