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Popular products in Heongseong

양기연/2025-05-06

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In addition to beef, the region has popular products such as medicinal herbs and popular crops. First, Deodeok, a kind of root herb, is cooked in some ways, which is famous for its medicinal traits like ginseng or Ballon flower roots. And potatoes and tomatoes are popular. There is a tomato festival in a town of Heongseong. Potato rice cakes are the locals' pride. Fresh trout is attracting many visitors. Lastly I like corns best.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
Wow! Thank you for sharing with me the different products that Heongseong has to offer. As I can see, they put a lot of effort into agriculture, so I'm thinking it's really a good place for farmers to live in.
- T. Caitlyn
In addition to beef, the region has popular products such as medicinal herbs and popular crops. 
>> CORRECT 
First, Deodeok, a kind of root herb, is cooked in some ways, which is famous for its medicinal traits like ginseng or Ballon flower roots. 
>> First, Deodeok, a kind of root herb, is cooked in various ways and is famous for its medicinal traits, like ginseng or balloon flower roots.
And potatoes and tomatoes are popular. 
>> Potatoes and tomatoes are also popular.
There is a tomato festival in a town of Heongseong. 
>> There is a tomato festival in the town of Heongseong.
Potato rice cakes are the locals' pride. 
>> CORRECT 
Fresh trout is attracting many visitors. 
>> CORRECT 
Lastly I like corns best.
>> Lastly, I like corn the best.

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