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이민주/2024-12-23

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I may enjoy singing, dancing, camping, shopping with my siblings!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Minju! You mentioned really fun activities with friends. I hope you can do it soon. Thank you for the wonderful answer. See you!

--Teacher Anji

I may enjoy singing, dancing, camping, shopping with my siblings!

>> I may enjoy singing, dancing, camping, and shopping with my siblings!