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Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc
이영인/2024-12-22
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Do you always sit down for a long time?
Where is your favorite place to sit?
à My favorite place to sit is a cozy armchair by the window. I try not to sit for too long and take breaks to stretch or walk around.
In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
In what conditions would you use a computer?
à It’s difficult to use a computer without internet or during a power outage. I use computers mostly for work, studying, and entertainment like watching videos or playing games.
What would your life be like without computers?
When was the first time you used a computer?
à Life without computers would be less convenient, especially for communication and work. I first used a computer in elementary school for simple games and typing practice.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Happy Monday YOUNG IN! Monday provides an opportunity to reflect on your goals for the week ahead. If you are working on something that you really care about, you don’t have to be pushed. The vision pulls you! Keep your balance!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Do you always sit down for a long time?
Where is your favorite place to sit?
My favorite place to sit is a cozy armchair by the window. I try not to sit for too long and take breaks to stretch or walk around.
>>>I love sitting in a cozy armchair by the window, but I make sure to take breaks to stretch or walk around.
Where is your favorite place to sit?
My favorite place to sit is a cozy armchair by the window. I try not to sit for too long and take breaks to stretch or walk around.
>>>I love sitting in a cozy armchair by the window, but I make sure to take breaks to stretch or walk around.
In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
In what conditions would you use a computer?
It’s difficult to use a computer without internet or during a power outage. I use computers mostly for work, studying, and entertainment like watching videos or playing games.
>>> It's hard to use a computer without internet or during a power outage. I mainly use computers for work, studying, and entertainment, like watching videos or playing games.
It’s difficult to use a computer without internet or during a power outage. I use computers mostly for work, studying, and entertainment like watching videos or playing games.
>>> It's hard to use a computer without internet or during a power outage. I mainly use computers for work, studying, and entertainment, like watching videos or playing games.
What would your life be like without computers?
When was the first time you used a computer?
Life without computers would be less convenient, especially for communication and work. I first used a computer in elementary school for simple games and typing practice.
Life without computers would be less convenient, especially for communication and work. I first used a computer in elementary school for simple games and typing practice.
>>>Life without computers would be less convenient, especially for communication and work. I first used a computer in elementary school for games and typing practice.
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