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What are your thoughts on space tourism?

차진혁/2024-12-22

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I think space tourism is very dangerous because people is not used to. But, I think spacetourism is very amazing too.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy your evening! 


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I think space tourism is very dangerous because people is not used to.
>> I think space tourism is very dangerous because people are not used to it. 

But, I think spacetourism is very amazing too.
>> But I think it is very amazing, too.
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