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이영숙/2024-12-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If I had a million dollars. I will go to travel the world. If you need helf.I asked to someone. I was hungry. So I brought some foods. If the weather is nice. When l going to picnic. So I am happy is it. The movie was boring. So I fell asleep.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Michelle!

Great job with your homework. Just take note of a few grammar corrections, but when it comes to the use of 'if' and 'so,' you did well! I hope this homework helped you understand it better!

- T. Caitlyn

If I had a million dollars. I will go to travel the world.

>> If I had a million dollars, I would travel the world.
If you need helf.I asked to someone.

>> If you need help, I will ask someone.
I was hungry. So I brought some foods.

>> I was hungry, so I brought some food.
If the weather is nice. When l going to picnic. So I am happy is it.

>> If the weather is nice, then I will go on a picnic so I can be happy.
The movie was boring, so I fell asleep.

>> CORRECT