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How do you see yourself 10 years from now?

이진태/2024-12-20

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Ten years later, I would be a late fourty. I might already have a child or children. Obviously, I still will be working.
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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Ten years later, I would be a late fourty.
 >> Ten years later, I will be in my late forties.

I might already have a child or children.
>>Correct
OR >>I could already have one or more children.  

Obviously, I still will be working.
>> Obviously, I will still be working.
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