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Do you believe that sometimes tough love is necessary for personal growth?

이진태/2024-12-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I learned a lot via previous love. they all had different personalities. I absorbed their personalities naturally. I think it's processes of socialization.
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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I learned a lot via previous love.
>> I learned a lot from previous relationships.

they all had different personalities.
>> Correct
OR >> Each of them had a unique personality.

I absorbed their personalities naturally.
>> Correct
OR >> I naturally adapted to their personalities.

I think it's processes of socialization.
>> I think it's part of the socialization process.




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