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Do you think the court will approve president Yoon's impeachmet, which was passed by the National A

차진혁/2024-12-19

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I think passed by the National Assembly is president Yoon's impeachment because Yoon's is martial law was declared. So now President Yoon's approva rating is very be low.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Good evening! 


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                       Do you think the court will approve president Yoon's impeachment, which was passed by the National Assembly? 


I think passed by the National Assembly is president Yoon's impeachment because Yoon's is martial law was declared.
>> I think the National Assembly passed President Yoon's impeachment because he declared martial law. 

So now President Yoon's approva rating is very be low.
>> So President Yoon's approval rating is very low now. 
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