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How does the location of a business affect its success?
이승훈/2024-12-19
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Well, I think the location of a business is very important.
First of all, it's hard to go to work if location of a business in a rural or strange place.
And it's easy customers to visit when easy find place.
However, But it's a bad if location of a business is many companies around, because there is a lot of traffic.
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Hi, Hun!
Great job with your sentences. I can see that your English writing skills are improving. Keep it up!
- T. Caitlyn
Well, I think the location of a business is very important.
>> CORRECT
First of all, it's hard to go to work if location of a business in a rural or strange place.
First of all, it's hard to go to work if location of a business in a rural or strange place.
>> First of all, it's hard to go to work if the location of a business is in a rural or strange place.
And it's easy customers to visit when easy find place.
And it's easy customers to visit when easy find place.
>> And it's easy for customers to visit when the place is easy to find.
However, But it's a bad if location of a business is many companies around, because there is a lot of traffic.
However, But it's a bad if location of a business is many companies around, because there is a lot of traffic.
>> However, it's bad if the location of a business has many companies around, because there is a lot of traffic.
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