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If you could have any workout buddy (real or fictional), who would it be?

임주미/2024-12-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

It would be my friend Soon - ok, , she lives near my house 10 minutes by walking. she is a year younger than me. I think we have similar tendency and we listen to each other well.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ju Mi! It's great to have a work out buddy who knows you well. ^^ Thank you for sharing your ideas. Have a good day as always!

~T. Jewel

It would be my friend Soon - ok, ,

>>It would be my friend Soon-Ok.

>> If you could have any workout buddy, it would be my friend Soon-Ok.

she lives near my house 10 minutes by walking.

>>She lives near my house, and it only takes 10 minutes to walk there.

she is a year younger than me.

>>She is a year younger than me.

OR
>>She is one year younger than I am.
I think we have similar tendency and we listen to each other well.

>>I think we have similar tendencies, and we listen to each other well.