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I'm make friends with other kids is the play games with together is very quickly become friends. So I'm many make new friends.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Good evening!

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Jean~~

How do you make friends with other kids?

I'm make friends with other kids is the play games with together is very quickly become friends. So I'm many make new friends.

>> I make friends with other kids by playing games together and we quickly become friends by doing this.