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김재현/2024-12-17

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Hi Teacher Divina, Happy Tuesday, Thank you for giving me homework Homework Do you think learning a new language helps people understand different cultures? How so? My answer Yes , I think so. I need to know a new language . It 's because when I travel to a language country, I can understand local people's saying well and receive local feeling well.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. Yes , I think so.

>>Yes, I think so.

2. I need to know a new language .

>>I need to learn a new language.

3. It 's because when I travel to a language country,
I can understand local people's saying well and receive local feeling well.

>>It's because when I travel to another country, I can understand what the local people are saying, and I can also receive their feelings well.