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12/13 Homework

권예민/2024-12-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1. Mark writes with his left hand. -> Mark wrote with his left hand. 2. Susie works at a bank. -> Susie worked at a bank. 3. My mother knits beautiful sweaters. -> My mother knitted beautiful sweaters. 4. He makes models from clay. -> He made models from clay. 5. Cows feed on grass. -> Cows fed on grass.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Ye Min,
Great job!!!
I can see you're trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny

1. Mark writes with his left hand.
-> Mark wrote with his left hand.
>>Correct
2. Susie works at a bank.
-> Susie worked at a bank.
>>Correct
3. My mother knits beautiful sweaters.
-> My mother knitted beautiful sweaters.
>>Correct
4. He makes models from clay.
-> He made models from clay.
>>Correct
5. Cows feed on grass.
-> Cows fed on grass.

>>Correct