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김나라/2024-12-16

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: How important is it to get along with co-workers? Is it a good idea to socialize with them outside work? answer : Everyone needs help at work, and if I get along well with my company, I can ask for help without difficulty. And although I have private meetings with my company people, I always think I keep the right line. I have no choice but to be a competitor in the company..

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Hello, Ms. Nara! I also believe getting along with co-workers is crucial for a positive and productive work environment.

-T. Sonny

Everyone needs help at work, and if I get along well with my company, I can ask for help without difficulty.

>>Correct!
And although I have private meetings with my company people, I always think I keep the right line.

>>And although I have private meetings with my colleagues, I believe I should always keep boundaries.

I have no choice but to be a competitor in the company..

>>I have no option but to compete within the company.