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What do you know about your country's food culture?

차유진/2024-12-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think my country's food culture is well divided main food and side food for example "bibimbap"is main food and "kimchi" is side food. I want many people know Korean food.
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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good one! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

                             

                    What do you know about your country's food culture?

I think my country's food culture is well divided main food and side food for example "bibimbap"is main food and "kimchi" is side food.
>> I think my country's food culture is well divided into main food and side food, for example, "bibimbap" is the main food, and "kimchi" is the side food.

I want many people know Korean food.
>> I want many people to know Korean food.
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