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류영주/2024-12-13

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Q: How important is the menu when running a cafe? A: I think it's one of the most important things when running a cafe. If a cafe makes beverages well, but people don't really want it, there wouldn't be enough demand, and it would be hard to earn money. Also, there would be a trend, and if a cafe follows the trend, there would be more demand temporarily.

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Hello, Paul!

I really like your response—it shows that you're thinking deeply about what makes a cafe successful!

~ Teacher Trixia

CONTENT:

I think it's one of the most important things when running a cafe.

- CORRECT.

>>> OR: I think the menu is one of the most important aspects of running a cafe.

If a cafe makes beverages well, but people don't really want it, there wouldn't be enough demand, and it would be hard to earn money.

- CORRECT.

>>> OR: If a cafe makes beverages well, but people don't really want them, there wouldn't be enough demand, and it would be hard to make money.

Also, there would be a trend, and if a cafe follows the trend, there would be more demand temporarily.

- CORRECT.

>>> OR: Also, trends can influence demand, and if a cafe follows a trend, it might see a temporary increase in customers.