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김재현/2024-12-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hi Teacher Divina, Happy Thursday, Thank you for giving me homework. Homework How do family members help each other in your home? My answer My family members help each other with housworks . And my parents always help me and my brother. They pay costs what I want to do something.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. My family members help each other with housworks .

>>My family members help each other with the housework.

2. And my parents always help me and my brother.

>>My parents always help me and my brother.

3. They pay costs what I want to do something.

>>They pay for the costs when I want to do something.