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what are some common reasons people feel guilty?

최서연/2024-12-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think what people feel in common has to do with people's instincts, such as being complacent about the weak and being unloved. Feeling guilty must be because I felt that I could change the situation with my will. So, isn't it possible to protect and love the weaked rather than me if I can do something with a change in my behavior? Like children or animals.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Seo Yeon~

In my opinion, guilt may be involved when we believe that our environment does not support our behavior. ;/

Chammy

I think what people feel in common has to do with people's instincts, such as being complacent about the weak and being unloved.
>>Correct

Feeling guilty must be because I felt that I could change the situation with my will.

>> I think my sense of guilt stems from my belief that I have the power to control occurrences.

So, isn't it possible to protect and love the weaked rather than me if I can do something with a change in my behavior? Like children or animals.

>> Isn't it possible to protect and love the weak, like children or animals, instead of just focusing on myself if I can change my behavior?