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이현준/2024-12-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I protect my health on my own.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Jun!

I appreciate your diligence in doing your homework. As I have said, try to be more expressive.

T. Aki~

I protect my health on my own.

>>> CORRECT!

OR >> I am responsible for my health. However, there are professionals who could help me when I can no longer protect myself on my own.