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이민주/2024-12-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

The kid-friendly television programs in my country are ‘Minions’, ‘Doraemon’ or ‘Pororo’. I recommend them to the children. They are funny!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Minju! These programs are really good and funny. It will definitely entertain the kids. Thank you for answering the question. See you next time!

--Teacher Anji

The kid-friendly television programs in my country are ‘Minions’, ‘Doraemon’ or ‘Pororo’.

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I recommend them to the children. They are funny!

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