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I like ocen view restaurant and a lot of the light decoration. Of course l hope the delicious food.

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Hi, Michelle!

Wow! I think that kind of view of a restaurant is really nice and cozy. I believe having such a view and decoration can attract more customers.

- T. Caitlyn

I like ocen view restaurant and a lot of the light decoration.

>> I like ocean view restaurants with a lot of lights as decorations.

Of course l hope the delicious food.

>> Of course, I hope for delicious food.