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김재현/2024-12-10

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Hi teacher Divina, Happy Tuesday, Thank you for giving me homework Homework What can you say about the public transport drivers in Korea( bus driver, taxi driver, ets.)? My answer I think my country public drivers are deserving people because they have a certificate about public transport. Some drivers are not kind and Jeju Island taxi drivers drive sometimes dangerous . So I 'm sometimes nervous.
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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think my country public drivers are deserving people because they have a certificate about public transport.
>>I think my country's public drivers are deserving people because they have certificates to drive a certain public transport.

2. Some drivers are not kind and Jeju Island taxi drivers drive sometimes dangerous . So I 'm sometimes nervous.
>>Some drivers are not kind, and some Jeju Island taxi drivers drive dangerously. So, I'm sometimes nervous.

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