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06Dec2024_Homework

김나라/2024-12-10

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: What’s one thing you’ve always wanted to learn or try, and why? answer: If given the chance, I would like to learn the piano. I learned the piano when I was young, but I didn’t finish. So, I’ve been looking for a piano academy, but it’s not easy to find the time.

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Hello, Ms. Nala! I wish you could find time to pursue your hobbies as well. Thank you for sharing!

-T. Sonny

If given the chance, I would like to learn the piano.

>>Correct!

I learned the piano when I was young, but I didn’t finish.

>>I learned the piano when I was young, but I never finished the course.

So, I’ve been looking for a piano academy, but it’s not easy to find the time.

>>So, I’ve been looking for a piano academy, but it’s not easy to find time.