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김나라/2024-12-10

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: How do you feel when you drink too much coffee? answer: I drink about 4 shots of coffee a day, and I feel that coffee gives me a lot of energy and improves my concentration. However, sometimes when I have more than 4 shots, my heart starts pounding, and I can't sleep.
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Hello, Ms. Nala! I get the same feeling when I drink too much coffee in a day. Although, I can still sleep soundly even after them. 
-T. Sonny 
I drink about 4 shots of coffee a day, and I feel that coffee gives me a lot of energy and improves my concentration.
>>Correct!
OR. I consume roughly 4 shots of coffee daily, and I find that it boosts my energy and enhances my focus.
However, sometimes when I have more than 4 shots, my heart starts pounding, and I can't sleep.
>>Correct!
OR. However, sometimes when I have more than 4 shots, I get palpitations and it's difficult to fall asleep.
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