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도은경/2024-12-10

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I don’t like studying not yet. But sometimes, when I want to know about something with curiosity , I like studying about it. For example when the bread I baked was failed, I want to know why the bread was bad condition🤷🏻‍♀️

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Hi Eun Kyeong!

I get what you mean.

In my perspective, free talking is a way for you to be more comfortable using the English language.

Random everyday questions are given so you could be familiar with everyday conversation.

Feel free to always ask question or we can go back to the book setting if that would make you more comfortable. :)

Andrea

I don’t like studying not yet.

>> I don't like studying anymore.

But sometimes, when I want to know about something with curiosity , I like studying about it.

>> But sometimes, when I want to know about something I am curious with, I like to study about it.

For example when the bread I baked was failed, I want to know why the bread was bad condition

>> For example when I did not succeed in teh brad that I baked, I want to know the reason.