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If you could only pack three things for a sleepover, what would you bring?

임주미/2024-12-10

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If I need to pack three things for a sleepover , I would bring sleepwear,toiletrie and book. Of course I could't read the book.What should I prepare more anything else ? I think It is enough three items.
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Hello, Ju Mi! A book is an interesting choice! ^^ Thank you for sharing your ideas. I hope you enjoy your day today!
~T. Jewel
If I need to pack three things for a sleepover , I would bring sleepwear,toiletrie and book.
>>If I need to pack three things for a sleepover, I would bring sleepwear, toiletries, and a book.
Of course I could't read the book.
>>Of course, I couldn't read the book.
What should I prepare more anything else ?
>>What else should I prepare?
I think It is enough three items
>>I think three items are enough.
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