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What volunteer work do you see yourself doing? Why?
이진태/2024-12-09
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I had a volunteer experiences.
When I was a high school students, I joined volunteer club that made by my friend.
She wanted to get a extra points during a university entarance. so she made a club.
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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I had a volunteer experiences.
>> I had volunteer experience.
When I was a high school students, I joined volunteer club that made by my friend.
>> When I was a high school student, I joined a volunteer club that was created by my friend.
She wanted to get a extra points during a university entarance. so she made a club.
>> She wanted to earn extra points for her university entrance, so she started the club.
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